I knew it was wrong...

But I just wanted to see Setsuna so badly, and I thought I might never -- I thought it was my only chance to be reunited with Setsuna again.

But it was still wrong. And I knew it was... I... I took advantage of her innocence anyway. But I was desperate. I was at the end of my rope. It was a last resort...

I don't know why she didn't hate me. I would have hated me, if I had been her.

I was in love. I would have done anything to get to him.

Hi! ♥ This is a characterization discussion/complaint thread for the following characters:

Mudou Sara + Angel Sanctuary + the_lady_sara

Nosaka Miho ("Ribbon-chan") + Yu-Gi-Oh! + cute_fangirl

Be as brutally honest as you feel is necessary. I like to think I'm a big girl who can handle it, and hopefully I'm right. I do ask you keep any complaints/criticisms/opinions/etc. both about my characters and related to polychromatic somehow. This isn't the place for random discussion of some other game or some other player you hate. But I don't think you guys will have a problem with that. Also, make sure there's some kind of actual criticism or assessment of my abilities in there somewhere; comments that are (for example) just "You suck." with no explanation don't help me get better and will just get ignored.

If you'd rather, you can always email me any critcism or commentary at sammysaurus[at]operamail[dot]com.

...Another one. Great.

I can't wait until tomorrow. Setsuna and Kira-senpai are acting really weird.

I've always wished my chest was a little bigger. I mean, I've never wanted it to be huge or anything, but I'm aware I'm pretty small, especially compared to some people, and I've always kind of wanted to be just a little bit bigger. Once I even stuffed my bra just to see what I'd look like with... well, you know.

The zombies seem to be gone now. Thank goodness. That was really terrifying. I think I'll keep sticking to fruit juice for another day or so, though. Just in case.

I hope everyone is okay. Nobody was turned permanently, were they?

Setsuna and I stayed up late watching movies! And then Kira-senpai and Katou-senpai joined us. It was nice.

Oh! And then before that, I went to Hachiko's birthday party and stayed the night with her and Nana-san and some other girls. It was really fun! We got to hear Nana-san sing. She has a beautiful voice.

There's a huge fire! It's kind of scary, and I'm worried. I really hope nobody's been hurt. Does anyone know if everybody's all right? Everyone here at the firehouse is okay. There are fire extinguishers here you can borrow, if you know how to use them...

For that matter, does anyone know how the fire even got started in the first place? Ugh. I hope it was an accident or self-defense, and not somebody showing off or fighting over something trivial or just plain being an idiot about something!

It could have been worse. At least it wasn't one of Michael's tantrums this time...

The first people I want to thank are Ran-san and Nana-san! Thank you for being so nice and friendly when I first got here, and for offering to do stuff with me, and making me feel like I belonged here. It was really sweet of you and it made me feel like I wasn't alone. Also, thank you for being so nice to Setsuna!

Nill-chan, thank you for being so kind and sweet. You're so cute! It was really nice to get to meet someone as nice as you. You... remind me of someone, actually...

Elaine, thank you for welcoming me, as well! And thank you for whatever you've done for Setsuna to make him like you so much.

Sora, thank you for being so nice to me when I first got here, too! And thank you for answering my somewhat personal questions so graciously, without getting annoyed with me. You are a very nice person.

Alexiel-sama, thank you for everything. Thank you for the fact that Setsuna exists. Thank you for protecting us and not letting anyone hurt us. Thank you for letting me live in the Firehouse with you and the others. Thank you for being strong. Thank you for... everything.

Raphy, thank you for being my friend. Thank you for bringing Setsuna and me back to life. Thank you for accepting that I love Setsuna. And thank you for letting me call you "Raphy."

Rosiel, thank you for reminding me that not everyone is nice and not everyone can be trusted. Also, thank you for staying away for me, at least so far, and thank you for not doing anything awful to Setsuna.

Kira-senpai, thank you for protecting and taking care of Setsuna, in the city and out of it. Thank you for always being there, even when you were being an obnoxious bad influence! Thank you for saving my boyfriend's life, and thank you for being Setsuna's friend. And, in a way, thank you for being my friend, too.

Setsuna, thank you for being my brother and my lover and my friend and my protector. Thank you for loving me, and for always looking out for me. Thank you for the red ring you gave me when were kids. Thank you for always being huggable. Thank you for loving me so much you'd do anything for me. Thank you for making me call you "Setsuna" and not "brother." Thank you for always being there. Thank you for going to Hell and back just to rescue me. Thank you for looking out for me. Thank you for always being faithful to me. Thank you for being a good kisser. #._.# Just... thank you, Setsuna! Thank you so much.

...where am I? I don't... I don't know this place. How did I get here? What's going on? I know I've never been here before. How did...?

Setsuna? Where are you? Is this where you are?

...hello, everyone. I'm Mudou Sara. Have you seen my brother boyfriend brother, Setsuna, around anywhere? I can't seem to find him, and right now I'm looking everywhere. If anyone knows him or who he is or if he's here, please tell me. It's really important.

Please, please be here, Setsuna. I have to find you. We've come too far to stay separated now.

I'm looking forward to getting to know you all during my stay here. That's it for now, I think...